Could someone proofread this kanji text? I'm not sure if it's exact or not.

  • 各角色名场面发表
    树里:
    第35夜
    一切的开始。树里拼上性命将优姬变成人类!!
    [将你变成“人类”]

    为了孩子们拼上性命战斗的2人真的很帅!!(广岛县/Y·A)

    枢与优姬:
    第26夜
    在夜会低语的枢。将嘴唇靠近优姬的脖子……
    [要变成吸血鬼吗?优姬…]
    只有深爱的人的血才能满足饥渴。最喜欢枢对优姬强烈的爱意能传递到了(千叶县/まいきゃんぬ)
    枢第一次对优姬撒娇的场面。对枢来说能让他感到平静的只有优姬(奈良县/紫苑)


    枢与零
    第30夜
    两人间的憎恶爆发
    枢将自己的血给与了为饥渴所苦的零——
    [这血是谁献给你的——绝对不要忘记…]
    两人的利害一致,为了最喜欢的女孩…很厉害(崎玉县/あっさん)

    零与优姬
    第46夜
    纯血种优姬与零分道扬镳…
    初次的、告别之吻。
    [我只 想要你的血…]
    当时,反复读了三天左右好苦闷(爱知县/サバトラ)
    回到现在,读了各种漫画中最有冲击性印象最深(神奈川县/太田纱弥佳)

    零与优姬
    第87夜
    在假面舞会跳舞的两人…
    用假面掩饰内心…
    [你非常像…]
    用假面隐藏起真面目,优姬与零目光交错,一夜之梦真难受(山形县/ナナホ)

    优姬
    第83夜
    为了阻止枢
    优姬对抗枢!!
    [我不会再迷茫了!!]
    优姬终于!!的感觉(奈良县/创)

    The role name scenes Post
    Juri:
    35 Nights
    The beginning of everything. Juri fight their lives will become Yuki humans! !
    [Will you become a "man"]

    For the children to fight their lives fighting two people really handsome! ! (Hiroshima / Y · A)

    Shu and Yuki:
    26 Nights
    Pivot will whisper in the night. The lips close to Yuki's neck ......
    [Do you want to become a vampire? Yuki ...]
    Only the blood of people who love to meet hunger. Yuki favorite pivot on a strong love can be passed to the (Chiba / ma ki ゃ san Kei rice bran)
    The first pair of pivot Yuki spoiled scenes. Pair of pivot it only make him feel calm Yuki (Nara Prefecture / Aster)


    Pivot and zero
    30 Nights
    Hatred between the two outbreaks
    Pivot will give his own blood for the suffering hunger zero -
    [This is the blood who is dedicated to you - never forget ...]
    Consistent with the two stakes, in order to favorite girl ... very powerful (Saitama Prefecture / bean っ san)

    Zero and Yuki
    46 Nights
    Thoroughbred Yuki and Zero parted ways ...
    First, the farewell kiss.
    [I just want your blood ...]
    At that time, about three days good read repeatedly depressed (Aichi / thermal van Suites ra)
    Back to the present, reading a variety of comics most impact deepest impression (Kanagawa / Sayaka Ota Jia)

    Zero and Yuki
    87 Nights
    Masquerade dance in two ...
    With a mask to hide his ...
    [You very much like ...]
    With a mask hiding the true face of Yuki and Zero staggered eyes at night, the dream really uncomfortable (Yamagata Prefecture / Nana ホ)

    Yuki
    83 Nights
    In order to prevent the pivot
    Yuki confrontation pivot! !
    [I will not be confused! ! ]
    Yuki finally! ! Feeling (Nara Prefecture / Innovation)
  • >I'm not sure if it's exact or not.
    You should be.

    For your information, the above is Chinese. (...and just to nitpick, then it's called Hanzi, not that it matters)

    But google translate should've told you that already.

    Please read this sticky: http://japanologic.com/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=113

    Don't post machine translations as your or somebody else's translation, it makes no sense, you risk looking stupid, and above all it doesn't help.

    I think some people here might understand Chinese, but I'm sure you could get better help at a Chinese forum, such as
    http://forum.wordreference.com/forumdisplay.php?f=72

Howdy, Stranger!

It looks like you're new here. If you want to get involved, click one of these buttons!

In this Discussion